Hi!I hope you enjoy my last blog's haiku. Here are more to share with you.
Sun shining in the sky
Giving people bright sunshine
Enjoying the life.
Raindrops trickling
Droplets falling from the sky
Making world sparkle.
Sun is very bad
Causes skin cancer and blindness
How bad could it be?
Bye for now!
Wei Qian
Sun shining in the sky
Giving people bright sunshine
Enjoying the life.
Raindrops trickling
Droplets falling from the sky
Making world sparkle.
Sun is very bad
Causes skin cancer and blindness
How bad could it be?
Bye for now!
Wei Qian
posted by Star Blogger at
5:25 pm
2 Comments:
Wei Qian,
I think there's something wrong with the last haiku about the sun. There are 8 syllables for the middle part instead of 7. I think you will realise and edit it.
Ruo Ann
By
Star Blogger, at Friday, October 13, 2006 9:35:00 am
Rou Ann is right.There are eight syllables for the middle part instead of 7.
By:Si Han
By
Star Blogger, at Thursday, November 02, 2006 11:33:00 am
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